#135-139 of 154 for Tea Time in L.A. #46 of 50 - INSPIRED BY:
BtVS #31 (2.19)"I Only Have Ey|
Rhetorical verse for Tea Time in
L.A. #46 - (Talking about Buffy as Shakespeare
would have. <g>)
Posted by: forensicpopouri - May 16, 2002, 10:00
Sonnets #135-139 of
What? You think only
400-year-old Brits can write 154 sonnets?
verse in Shakespearean sonnet
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CORRECTION: 135-138 of
forensicpopouri - May 16, 2002, 10:07
LISTED AS 135-139 in original subject
1 of 4 (sonnet sequence) UNFORGIVENESS -
(inspired by BtVS episode 31 "I Only Have Eyes For
forensicpopouri - May 16, 2002, 10:05
TEA TIME SONNETS
Rhetorical verse in
Shakespearean sonnet form
Looking at my notes
I thought this
would be high praise.
For some reason . . .
Again I complain
of a flawed hero design
. . .
though I liked this ep.
I was moved
by Noxon's "orchestration"
of all the
Running low on gas
as we reach one
I let this pour out.
(at least what you truly think)
out when you're tired.
Maybe the truth is . . .
like Great Gatsby's writer wrote
daughter Scottie . . .
. . . "I'd just like to
in some acceptible form."
Uh oh!, Here
we go . . . <serious
- RE: "I Only Have Eyes For You" #31 of
(1) "THE DEMON
WHO WEAR'S [ANGEL'S] FACE," she said.
BOYFRIEND'S GONE FOREVER," Buffy
It's not the soul with which she went to
I like this episode, but Buffy blows
. . .
. . . away my sympathy with air-head
It's not a case of someone done her
Within her boyfriend's heart there was no
While Angel, his pure love for her
He did not make a choice
to turn on her.
The thing that stalks her
friends is just not him.
She says the words, but
they do not transfer
from where her lips move
down through her brain stem . . .
. . . into
her heart of hearts . . . which ought to know:
hate someone who's innocent is
2 of 4 (sonnet sequence) UNFORGIVENESS
forensicpopouri - May 16, 2002, 10:03
(2) IT WASN'T
ANGEL who killed Calendar.
SHE KNOWS a soulless
demon wears his face.
anger issues stir,
her stance of
unforgiveness has no
Yes, kill the vampire. That's her
But hate Angelus for
his evil acts?
Her personal heartbreak? Pure
is something that our hero,
revenge is "common-sense.".
cultural affliction none too rare.
THE WORLD nerves fray and muscles
responding to hard thoughts of "It's
not fair . . .
. . .They must be
made to pay for what they've
clarity."Where is my gun? . .
3-4 of 4 (sonnet sequence) UNFORGIVENESS
forensicpopouri - May 16, 2002, 10:02
(3) . . .
She hurt me badly. She did not return
the love I
gave her. Now the b*tch must pay.
(Rip off his
skin and then make his flesh burn.)
FORGET ABOUT THE RICOCHET . . .
. . . FROM
violence unleashed at anger's
There's always one stray shot that's off
and flies off into heaven. Angels
to earth with silenced messages. We hark
. . .
. . . in vain for what God hoped that
we would hear.
And so the anger quotient
Unleashing violence, and so,
I WONDER how much longer we can
last . . .
. . . with heroes who
can't ever understand
"love-your-enemy" command . . .
. . that came from someone men nailed on a
A small one Buffy wears upon
But as for what it means, she's at a
It works for self-defense . . . no vamps
molest . . .
. . . her cleavage without
punishment, right then.
Touch there, and
justice is an instant thing.
tiiresome sermons 'bout the wage of sin.
BURNS!" You yell so loud your own ears
No need to prove the crime, invoke
Somewhere a trigger's pulled.
Somewhere a scream.
Why did the Lord
design in all these flaws?
Buffy, maybe this is all a
STRANGE VERSE, since I liked this
Buf pretty well.
kind Dawson's Creek was truly
forensicpopouri - May 16, 2002, 10:01
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