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Buffy Verse Sonnets #19-20/154:
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Posted by: forensicpopouri - Mar 31, 2002, 2:31
IN THE BEGINNING
(RE BtVS #1: "Welcome To the
[CONTINUED FROM PART
(3) BUT THOSE ARE "LONG SHOT"
COMMENTS, let's zoom in
on how the story
grows in that first show.
Let's versify the
TEASER scenes, wherein
the tone is
set for where we are to go.
WE OPEN ON
A HIGH SCHOOL -- LATE AT NIGHT.
past Giles' lair to a science lab. . . .
"CRAWL" across the floor to our FIRST
A "THING" outside the window makes
a stab . . .
. . . and breaks the
glass. BUT it's just GIRL and BOY.
teens. The boy says come, let's go
The boy is confident. Is this some
For her -- it seems -- this is a
She hears a noise. She's
scared -- or so is seemed.
He says they're
all alone . . . THEN VAMP TEETH
(4) THE BIG SURPRISE, of
course, was it's THE GIRL
who was the
vampire. He who was the prey.
And with this
scene, Joss did his flag unfurl.
the Buffyverse went on display.
the episode in all details
would take more
verses than I mean to write.
we meet as they raise sails
sea. For us, love at first
Relationships bein. And vampire
begins to clog the sew'rs of
Trajectories of story gain their
and set our orbit. Joss has made the
I now shut up to let more
about ep number one. Please
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CORRECTION: Relationships BEGIN. And
vampire dust . . .
forensicpopouri - Mar 31, 2002, 2:41
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